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Posted by Bro on Saturday, 1. July 2006 at 19:07 Bali Time:

In Reply to: iam bored.its getting colder here, posted by sunshinecoasts on Saturday, 1. July 2006 at 17:35 Bali Time:

Hi Sunshinecoasts,

What a wonderful report and much easier to read with the paragraphs.
Thank you and well done!

But do accept this one piece of feedback. Begin each sentence with a capital letter. Just like this! People and places are imortant too, so they should also start with capitals. For example - Julie had a swimsuit made at Climax.

Keep up the good work,
Bro Ken


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